- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Train of thought
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Click hereTrain of Thought (a serenade)
Hey hey, Train Train
your lonely mornful sound
lifts me up, while I feel down
Hey Hey Train Train
the thought train of you
always leaves me, feeling blue
the clickity click ticks
of the rumbling tracks
always brings her memory back
rolling metal on a one way rail
carries me on a wind of prayer
headed somewhere ...
hey hey Train Train
conductor of this ride
sing sweet melodies for me this night
hey hey Train train
into the night you go
whistle for me sweet lonely and low
chugga chugga chugga ...chooo choo
"Next stop," nobody knows
listen for the lonesome whistle to blow
into darkness of a moons light glow
on and on this train of thought rolls
Hey Hey Train Train ...chooooo chooo
(begin again)
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoand here I thought you were in
poetic poem training? very nice!
You always seem to write great songs~
but then you call them ...seranades
Train of thought is an
excellent poem/seranade <grin>
Trent_Dutchabout 19 years agoYour Poem has been mentioned on the New Poems Reviews for Tuesday 1st of February.
WickedEveabout 19 years agoI enjoyed it all, but the line beginning with chugga and those last few lines after that, aren't quite as good as the rest of the poem. Those first 4 or 5 stanzas are really good.
