- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Trees
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Click hereDifferent shapes, different colors,
each one quite unlike the others
but still brothers.
All alone or in a grove;
in a forest I once drove
through a tree - literally!
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agoI think you might look at some of the oriental forms... the tanka might work well with the trees. Just work more on expressing your point with images, make me see a picture instead of you just talking about trees.
jim :)
Rybkaabout 20 years agoIMHO your poem is weakened when you abandon the rhyme for the twist in the last line. >?(((><
