- Erotic Poetry
- Tremors
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Click hereDo you remember the night?
The night we called divine
With all those enchantments
The scent that the night wore
Giving us the strength
To tear through the silence
Through the Tremors.
Your eyes, your lips, your smile
All were the part of the tale
Which we were going to write
All through the night
Even your sweat tasted like some sweet nectar
Of the flowers that bloom in the bliss
Through the Tremors.
My heart skipped a beat
When my touch sent shivers through your body
Like the fairy of heaven trembling
To get to the desire she has
To quench the thirst, the need
The need to let the emotions overpower
Through the tremors.
Do you remember my tears?
That my eyes shed, when we became one
The feeling of the unison
That was pulling my heart inside out
The pain of the pain you had
When I entered you for the first time
Through the Tremors.
I clenched you tight
Like I would lose you, will never see you again
When you went in the bliss
The heavens of our orgasms, Descending
You held me tight
As if your life depends on me
Now I know it did
Through the tremors.
Do you remember the night?
When I let my heart out
And had connected it to yours
Through the divine connection
Through my body and soul
Making you the queen of my kingdom, Pushing
Through the tremors
- COMMENTS
xblazealmost 8 years agoAuthorLosing one's virginity depends on more that having sex for the first time. It depends on the emotions, the feelings you have for your lover. If you have the same kind of emotions and feelings every time you make love to your lover, then yes. The feeling will be as if you are losing your virginity all over again.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI wish as a male I had been as aware and as sensitive as you on the night I lost my virginity. But the great thing about this poem is that it is written to your lover who is still your lover. Your hindsight in the present is interesting, because the sex is still going on--she is still the queen of your kingdom. "Through the tremors" is a good leitmotif. My question to you is: can you lose your virginity twice? Also, don't tremors happen in all love-making?
