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Click hereThe love a man and woman have, when together they are wed
Goes so much farther, than just the honey moon bed
Falling out of love isn't possible, if it was true love from the start
When you love someone more than yourself, you can't break their heart
Your love will last forever, and you can not deny
When one is hurt from sorrow, the other will also cry
You may have misunderstandings, you may even start to separate
You'll say I'm leaving for good, but you will always hesitate
You can not take such feelings, and toss them to the side
Love is not a game you play, true feelings you can not hide
Love for each other, even death can't take away
One will be left with memories, they'll meet again someday
When men and women separate, true love was never there
They married for lust and pleasure, for each other they did not care
Love is such a precious thing, make sure whatever you do
Stop and think about it, before you say, I LOVE YOU
yours is excellent, i like your version better. love this and look forward to more great reads
I loved this one. It tells the real feelings and does have a wonderful flow.. It is all in your Explicit words, tellin their tale.. Bravo I say~~ Do another , and let them all play.. *Smiles*
I really did like this, sounds like it's from the heart and truly meant..
LilDarlin~~
I see you met the grammar police...
I can see someone handing her a Ernest Hemingway novel and her edit it. Some peolpe have to change things...others are able to except your literary Art as you created it...
and it was most certainly a beautiful poem. (~_*)
Can I play?? Yes, let me play! Loved this :-)
The love a man and woman have, when together they are wed
Goes so much farther, than just the honey moon bed
Falling out of love isn't possible, if it was true love from the start
When you love someone more than yourself, you can't break their heart
Your love will last forever, and you can not deny
When one is hurt from sorrow, the other will also cry
You may have misunderstandings, you may even start to separate
You'll say I'm leaving for good, but you will always hesitate
You can not take such feelings, and toss them to the side
Love is not a game you play, true feelings you can not hide
Love for each other, even death can't take away
One will be left with memories, they'll meet again someday
When men and women separate, true love was never there
They married for lust and pleasure, for each other they did not care
Love is such a precious thing, make sure whatever you do
Stop and think about it, before you say, I LOVE YOU
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The love
a man and woman have
When together they are wed,
Goes so much farther
Than just the honey moon
In bed.
Falling out of love
Can not be possible,
If it's true love
From the start.
When you love someone
More than self,
You can't break
Each other's heart.
Your love
Will last forever,
And this, you can't deny.
When one is hurt
From sorrow,
The other
Will also cry.
You may have
Misunderstandings;
Even start to separate.
You might say,
"I'm gone for good"
But then
Always hesitate.
You can not
Take these feelings,
And toss them
To the side.
Love is not
A game we play,
True feelings
Are hard to hide.
Love for one another;
Even death
Can't take away.
One is left with memories,
And they'll
Meet again
Someday.
When men and women separate,
True love
Was never there.
They married
For lust and pleasure,
In which
Is obvious
That love was never there.
Love is more
A precious thing;
So, be sure
In what you do.
You shouldn't have to think
Before you say,
That sweet
"Love you".
Ah! I played with the words, style and the flow. I couldn't help myself. Loved those rhymes :)