........Truth

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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calves rush to Mother Cow

iron filings fly to Magnet

a Seeker embraces

&

in turn

is engulfed by

.....Truth

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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wakingDownwakingDownalmost 9 years ago
I have to agree

This is a very enjoyable one to read. I really like when a poem plays with not just the words used, but the space they take and the space around them as well. Well put together and flowing freely, this poem is a gem.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 9 years agoAuthor
about the " calves " GM :

was inspired by a description about an incident in Saint Gajanan Maharaj's life when one of his devotees havin' seen him after a long time rushed forward " like a calf rushes towards it's Mother "

MOOOO !!

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 9 years agoAuthor
GM , praise from you is High Praise indeed & i'm deeply honoured that my poem

has been a " joy to read " for you !!!

I didn't intend the double entendre & i'm posting another poem by my friend Tapas Bandopadhyay

warm regards,

Ash9

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 9 years ago

This is really good, ash. (Maybe even 1201 would like it!)

The organic and inorganic pointed to the ultimate abstraction with a wonderful, sparse language.

You may or may not have intended the double entendre of "calves," either as representatives of legs or children running towards "Mother Cow," but what a wonderful play with a word!

Nicely done! This was a joy to read.

tazz317tazz317about 9 years ago
SEEK AND YOU MIGHT FIND

lust on a bar stool and burger joint. TK U MLJ LV NV

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