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Click hereTumbles into the unknown
head first and full of grace.
Waiting so patiently
has its rewards
his smile of approval
his warm embrace
his soft kiss
brushes smooth cheek
heightened by desire's flush.
Promises kept
truth revealed
as eyes meet and spark.
Nervous giggle
betrays delicious apprehension.
Hand pressed against spine
perhaps a bit too low
gently guides the way.
Knowing glances
can't keep themselves
from becoming penetrating stares.
Restless hands
find reason
to touch bare skin.
Fingertips communicate
the unspoken.
Tongue tip moistens lips
highlights texture and sheen,
the delicate flick almost missed.
Breath stutters
its faint echo transmits
the ache from deep inside;
full-throttle awareness.
Closed door
braces her back.
Bodies slam together.
Hands held above head
while mouth-play intensifies.
Surrender is near.
Her body goes limp,
gathers strength from
his presence, confidence.
Her deep moan
triggers his reaction
as he knows, without a doubt
she is mine.
Blistering, ICM! The passion here sizzles, but I think you overwork some of the images a bit ("bodies slam together", etc.). A wonderful read from a talented poet!
Nice progression and crisp lines. I particularly liked:
"from becoming penetrating stares."
It sticks out for me (lol-not an intentional pun) it is powerful in it's context and speaks to the sexuality of the poem.