Tunnel Vision

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It
begins
in focal origo of all.
A single point of if,
cue strike lineup in beautiful
perhaps
      perhaps
            perhaps

A tricep flex, impeccably balanced,
can set the inevitable column moving
towards impact and improbability

to trip the light fantastic once upon a dream over the hills and far away and back again the hills are alive with the sound of my name is Ishmael my name is my name is Slim Shady who stole Christmas before the nightmare before the nightmare the nightmare nightmare nightmare

It
ends
when his being
has devoured all perception
but a corona glittering at the edge
of vision, and there is no more air
inside to breathe.

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TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
The last comment was mine.

Forgot to sign in...I don't do the 'anonymous' thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I agree.

This is a very fine first poem here, and very original.

Let's see more, please.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
nightmare

I think I understood the nightmare part <grin...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Holy Cow!

What a debut! Welcome to Literotica!

Tess - waiting for more.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Can't See Where I'm Not

Very intense.

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