- Erotic Poetry
- Twice Bitten
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I was once shy
once quiet
once tame
a mouse
in sheep's clothing
Midsummer night
cool wine
hungry blues
I keep the wall company
while sipping and watching
writing poems in my mind
about dancers and revelers
till the glass is dry
Invisible, I pass
between wildcats
behind gorillas
circling she-panthers
a lamb in the jungle
Safe at the oasis,
more wine,
a hunting groove
bass thumping my chest
blood drumming in my ears
turning back to home, the wall
wending through wildlife
passing into penumbra
shifting under shadow
a dark finger presses
″Quiet″ on my lips
At once I'm scared
heady perfume
electrifies me
shivers me
her body presses me
into an oreo
behind me purrs another,
her hunger in my ear
Long fingers
strong hands
close quarters
I stutter to escape
their peristaltic grip
squirm for breath,
or a drink of wine
while they whisper
husky intentions in my ear
tracing targets along my torso
with tempered talons
a coo in front
a growl behind
my body rigid
with fear
with --
Twice bitten
a stereo of paired sensation
erotic pain
exquisite fear
delicious draining
I sink between
twin sisters
desire and death
mirrors of their own needs
Twice bitten
once shy
once quiet
once tame
a mouse
No more
2014
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 9 years agothinks the poem is beautifully written; it created greater tension between the women in their lustful dance to fulfill their desires. I would collapse at her feet, my head pressed into her pelvis...warm and rich with her scent.
todski28almost 9 years agoYour ending verse should finish
On mirrors of their own needs and leave the rest for your reader.
All in all entertaining and some very nice phrasing
