Twighlight in the Tundra

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Kiki_cat
Kiki_cat
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My heart was a yard of spikes and fences
to keep others out
to keep you in
to inflict order upon Chaos.  

You pricked your lovely fingers
on my poisoned barbs, and
frightened,
you fled
  you jumped
     you ran away,
  bounding
    like a wounded,
  hunted
doe.

Now at dusk, there is no territory.  
No ownership or definition --
Fences raised to piss against.
There is nothing

but the stark stony silence
of a land resisting definition, ownership.
And like inner Greenland
Who would go there?

Today and tomorrow
have had a divorce
and I...
I have learned to suffer.

Kiki_cat
Kiki_cat
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Kiki_catKiki_catover 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much - who knew I could find an outlet for my poetry here. So many poems that were destined forever to be kept in a dark drawer - thanks for bringing them out into the light with your appreciation.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
harsh place to be

You pricked your lovely fingers

on my poisoned barbs, and

frightened,

you fled

you jumped

you ran away,

bounding

like a wounded,

hunted

doe.

(this for some reason won't template the same as you have written it)

This actually gave me a visual image of something jumping and bounding away.

final lines really smack home.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Exciting....

......to find such an accomplished new poet. The enjambment in verse 2 is very effective. These lines.....

"There is nothing

but the stark stony silence

of a land resisting definition, ownership."

...hiss with intesity. Very nice.

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
This is excellent writing

fierce and infused with stony resoluteness. I've been there and your poem really works for me. Thank you for posting it. :-)