Twilight Walk

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KOLKORE
KOLKORE
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I
I slip over a shrub
Grateful for its naked arms
Pleasure marks over my back.

II
I eardrop the top trees
Playing hide and seek
Giggles and whistles all over my head.

III
To the slipping sun
I raise my hands
Catching a floating sliver.

KOLKORE
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 15 years ago
^

Walking the walk, talking the talk.

AnschulAnschulabout 16 years ago
Close your eyes and ...

Wonderful imagery. God, I loved the third stanza!

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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eardrop the top trees, a little too strange for me. I found it hard to get any kind of a fix on this.

darkerdreamerdarkerdreamerabout 16 years ago
I love this line

"I eardrop the top trees" because I expected it to be 'treetops' and it wasn't, which made it all the better. I like your recent (and not so recent) experiments with playing the unexpected card, I think that suit fits you well.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Creative imagery with an economy of words.

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