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Twin Haiku

byMindsMirror©

gently planted kiss
between the lips of my sis
simply brings me bliss

quietly listen
brother's heart beat increasing
suddenly stiffen

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by eidetic02/27/17

difficult

Haiku is a difficult form, requiring exactly 17 syllables.
You have executed it well and in English no less.
Thank you.

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