Two Nicknames

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Over by the concrete
wall of a worn-down dam,
as one crosses the first
Yellow Springs' footbridge,
near the end where
one must use stones
to step over water
to the next footbridge,
I engraved something,
long, long ago.

Cut into the rail,
nearly a decade before,
now eroded and so faded,
it's hard to see
two nicknames:

my oldest
and his strangest.

My fingers slide over
the smooth wood plank
until there are dips
and the faint "home"
and the light "iam"
catch the light, just right.
I look upon them now
as a reminder that this
was not just my mind
being ever so clever.
These were mine
long before anyone else
ever heard either one.

I smile, and add a touch
of erosion as I rub
the words I once engraved.

I look up into the trees,
and then continue my hike,
as I grasp one of life's
secret curiosities.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Deep woods.

When walking down memory lane, a walk through a familiar woods is so evocative. There is something about the vibration of life there that is so special.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
wonderful walk

thank you for taking us along, great combination of images and story.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
oh yeah

I LOVE this

I have trees behind my house where i carved things long ago.

it's like a time tunnel isn't it?

great poem

made me stop and think

Funny how the woods, nature, can make us want to leave a piece of ourselves.

Nice work

thank you

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