- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Two Sisters
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Click hereTwo fine life-changing people make my days
More meaningful than ever. These two girls
Affect me in so many subtle ways.
I can't begin to describe how these pearls,
These precious gems of human nature prove
There is a God. And when I see them smile
At me with pure unconditional love,
They make the worst of times all seem worthwhile.
When out-of-control emotions take hold,
These miracles can shine their magic light
Where darkness lives, illuminating old
Worn-down feelings and make them all seem trite.
Two gentle people can my spirits lift;
Their sweet existence is the greatest gift.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 16 years agoYet another sweet piece from Lit's newest sonnet machine, with sisters that are the light of Daddy's life. {But one sonnet a day for thirty days? Good luck.}
champagne1982almost 16 years agoI really like the eye-rhyme you use, love and prove, rather than force a cliché or yoda speak to make something else work. I stumbled in L11, check your syntax, the abrupt sentence segment subject switch is awkward. Another good sonnet from the guy who's rapidly becoming the pobo's bard. Thanks for sharing.
