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Click hereshe waits and listens,
does He come nigh,
she waits and quietens,
Is He the man?
her form is aflutter,
her throat arched in supplication
They all walk and she passes them by,
Nary a glance , nary a thought
He will claim ,
He will devour
she opens her hand,
His heart rests there
she opens her dress,
her breasts beat within
she lays bare her heart,
He takes it in His hand.
Taking and claiming
devouring His flesh,
offering hers to Him ,
forevermore
Taking the side and making her His
does the lil bird fly?
Does the lil bird Claim?
in the end she does
I thought this was fun-- isn't that what this is about anyway? I enjoyed myself reading this poem.
I agree with the comment below. It points to a symptom of the problem of this poem--this poem has nothing really interesting to say (hence it attempts to make up for it by verbiage).
Regards,
Senna Jawa
nigh, quietens, aflutter, Nary, lil ? Come on, You lessen your work with unnecessary and out of character flourishes.