Un- minded one

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she waits and listens,
does He come nigh,
      she waits and quietens,
Is He the man?
      her form is aflutter,
her throat arched in supplication      
  
They all walk and she passes them by,
Nary a glance , nary a thought
      
He will claim ,
He will devour      
she opens her hand,
His heart rests there
     she opens her dress,
her breasts beat within    
she lays bare her heart,
He takes it in His hand.
  
Taking and claiming  
devouring His flesh,
offering hers to Him ,
forevermore        
  
Taking the side and making her His
does the lil bird fly?
Does the lil bird Claim?
in the end she does      
  

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
great

outrageously sensual imagery

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
hey

I thought this was fun-- isn't that what this is about anyway? I enjoyed myself reading this poem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Interesting

I loved it and believe its one of the best poems

Senna JawaSenna Jawaover 20 years ago
say something only when you have something to say

I agree with the comment below. It points to a symptom of the problem of this poem--this poem has nothing really interesting to say (hence it attempts to make up for it by verbiage).

Regards,

Senna Jawa

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Come nigh and hither, my heart doth beat aflutter

nigh, quietens, aflutter, Nary, lil ? Come on, You lessen your work with unnecessary and out of character flourishes.

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