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Click hereyou're my obsession, now
and everything i have to say is too intense...
too passionate for you
i'd like to rhyme and woo
to the melancholy beat of Scottish pop,
but the music would just be my tears, once removed
still, i am writing
and that removes these words, too
with the distance between us,
that's once from me, and two times from you
so, consider this song unsent
because, if i sent it you wouldn't get it
and consider it unfinished
if i keep on writing, i'll just keep lying
because i can't get any closer than crying
I love the feelings you paint here.
It comes pouring out in a song
like voice, with feelings~unsent.
Just great imagery and wording.
I would have did a lil
with the caps, just me.
Welcome to Lit.
I think you have, a lot of potential
and very much look forward
to more poetry ... from you !!
* Smiles*