Un(sent/finished)

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you're my obsession, now
and everything i have to say is too intense...
too passionate for you

i'd like to rhyme and woo
to the melancholy beat of Scottish pop,
but the music would just be my tears, once removed

still, i am writing
and that removes these words, too
with the distance between us,
that's once from me, and two times from you

so, consider this song unsent
because, if i sent it you wouldn't get it

and consider it unfinished

if i keep on writing, i'll just keep lying
because i can't get any closer than crying

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Great Catch ~

I love the feelings you paint here.

It comes pouring out in a song

like voice, with feelings~unsent.

Just great imagery and wording.

I would have did a lil

with the caps, just me.

Welcome to Lit.

I think you have, a lot of potential

and very much look forward

to more poetry ... from you !!

* Smiles*

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