- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Unanswered
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Click hereNov 2003
Unanswered
Starlight shines on many faces.
Faces I might not see again.
Wishes that are not yet answered are kept in the starts brightness.
Wondering when I gaze at the stars will my thoughts be heard?
I look for answers that are not given to me when I need to hear it the most.
Time will tell when my face is among the others, when we all can feel the brightness of the stars and feel the togetherness of being in the same spot looking at the stars.
- COMMENTS
annaswirlsover 19 years agoDanny, some real promise in this poem, observations and reflections. I wonder what this would look like/sound like if you cut the more conversarional/journal like tone, trimmed it back and added some line breaks? Just curious.
