- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Uncertinty, whats going on
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Shallow breaths, electrical feelings going through my body...
Mind not thinking shock of what has been realized taking over...
Waves of excitement and fear... Not sure what is happening to me but knowing I want it
Knowing what I need... knowing soon I will have all of it...
Fear rising at the thought...
What all does it mean... Am I loosing myself in an emotion?
I want to let myself go with the feeling he's causing but I know not to...
Not yet...
Eyes closed picturing... Knowing its silly to feel this way so soon...
Can't stop the feeling of it rushing in the door...
Walls surrounding my heart crashing and crumbling at each word...
Rushing to rebuild in a hopeless attempt at something... anything to make it slow down...
Hopeless attempts but still important...
Heart making plans mind isn't so far behind...
Feeling like it's kind of rushing, heart fights saying no, mind says slow down, how to do so...
Deep breaths, tingles down my sides making me wish it were his hands, arms wrapping tight pulling me in for a slow dance.
Thoughts filling my mind making me laugh and smile this feeling so right.
Feeling so fast of a fall I can't stop it...
I feel the hurt of hurting others knowing their pain...
I hate hurting them but love the sunshine that I feel with him...
- COMMENTS
Godsangel2010almost 8 years agoAuthorI know how this can be seen as two different views on what this might be about. When I was writing this poem, I was more focused on the emotional aspects of how I felt with my boyfriend. He makes me feel like the poem, no we haven't had sex. I was falling in love and still am. This is the way that experience has made me feel. It is like this for some people I am told. I want to say to all of the perverted minds out there, I have been informed this could also be how feeling seduced feels. I know that raw emotions are in this poem and a few have got hard from reading this poem. I just wanted to let you all know that this is a poem about falling in love for the third time. I must admit when I found out that it sounded like a poem of seduction I was rather surprised, but I came back and reread it and it did sound that way a little bit. So I wanted to clear it up for those of you who could see that too. It was meant to be a love poem. So enjoy it :)
