- Non-Erotic Poetry
- undeserving of a title#1
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it pulls a power move, chameleon
shimmer and fade. camouflaged,
and dangerous, dangerflaged.
red beam automatic sighting streaking
across the archetypical dark and rainy
night that all ghost stories start
with. steam-powered juggernaut
devouring cityscapes, skyscraping
cloudscapes passing out religious pamphlets
"Yashua Has Risen!" smiling faces
proclaim in grainy three color printing.
regardless of his current situation of arisin',
we are falling.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoOh, I don't know. Maybe titleless #1. It's certainly deserving with its unique and creative style.
4degreesabout 17 years agoi understand my own challenge of titling my stuff...but this does just fine on its own, without a catchy title. but actually, undeserving #1 is rather catchy. great work, 2d.
curt
unapologeticabout 17 years agoDoubleD, I especially like the "steam-powered juggernaut
devouring cityscapes." I did find the extra spaces in the second and third lines a bit disconcerting, but I got over it quickly.
