Une Nuit Noire

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Caring kisses penetrate;
tender touches pierce;
my somnolent state
with an ardor fierce.

Her arm coyly snakes,
fitting me into her spoon.
The feel of her body makes
me passionately swoon.

Opening me; moving a leg
with a gentle touch
knowing fingers make me beg
that I want this oh so much.

I am yours; do as you will; enjoy my willing flesh.
then I will sleep once again with a mind refreshed.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
slow day for poetry

and I use the term loosely. you were a poor-baby, pity seeking bitch while you were alive and it is a shame your sorry attempts at poetry survive you. No one believed me when I told them how you treated me in private messages, well, I guess I get the last laugh, you can't treat me like crap from the grave. good riddance you hateful lying byatch

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
Eve's right

You're getting more and more graceful with form and rhyme; it's always a good thing when one notices the words first and the form later, if at all. These are nice tight lines and very pretty phrases.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
enjoyed

the play with the spoon idea... blue

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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Very nice. :) Mentioned on the new poems review thread.