- Erotic Poetry
- Unpredictable
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Perfect sloppy
embarrassing
passion
i sit pulsing
courage green
anchored in earth's first grunt
Sweating, her nipples
slip into my mouth,
poison me, corrupt me,
annoy and release me.
I sit pulsing
Citrus; bliss is even
A balanced reflection
my shit comes out hot, burning
fizzle. i reach for nectarine
even as my legs
crawl back into the light.
(her open cunt will pene
trate you and hold you in her
lips &
taste you and you will be
Tasted & you will scream &
Later, you will let it
happen to others).
- COMMENTS
sackover 18 years agoThe first half of the poem is better than the second half. You seem hell bent on shocking the reader, as in your "E" poem. Both poems have misspelled words and need editing. Good ideas that need some taming!
Anonymousover 18 years agoBut when I got to this point, it didn't work for me. A better word could've been used for "shit". I did get a little lost here to tell you the truth. I would use "and" instead of &, and also run a grammar and spell check. Slow down. *wink* I hope this helps.
my shit comes out hot, burning
fizzle. i reach for nectarine
even as my legs
crawl back into the light.
(her open cunt will pene
trate you and hold you in her
lips &
taste you and you will be
Tasted & you will scream &
Later, you will let it
happen to others).
