tagErotic PoetryUntil our bodies have met

Until our bodies have met

byDawnSaxxx©

My nights are query,
My days are long
Each minute without you,
goes on and on . . .
Until at last,
You're in my sight,
My eyes filled,
With such delight,
My blood flows fast,
To the beat of my heart,

'Each moment with you is so good,
I hope we never have to part'

You touch my lips,
As I stroke your hair,
From top to bottom,
Our bodies - bare
Rolling around,
Legs tangled up,
I'm in heaven now,
Our bodies have met

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by Anonymous05/19/18

A few brief suggestions.

Your heart is in the right place but your language like your legs are all tangled up.

Each moment with you is so good,
I hope I'm able to show wood
I hope we never have to part
I hope you didn't smellmore...

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