- Non-Erotic Poetry
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across the desert landscape of my mind
you came to me.
an undulating mirage
in the sweltering heat.
the open geography of your being
quenches my senses.
rolling hills voluptuous with sunlight
your flesh untamed.
this road we travel together
reveals new dimensions in the topography.
sweeping horizons
forged in the gravity of our being.
- COMMENTS
YDDabout 20 years agoYour metaphor works, but to my eye requires another stanza or two in the middle. Your "love land" could be broader in latitude and greater in elevation.
