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Click hereThe strangled cries bled from her crushed throat,
And bruises bloomed blue roses on white flesh as
His hands tightened. Her fragile body thrashed,
Her starving lungs ached to draw last breath.
She was still, as starbursts flashed in dying eyes
And angels with bowed heads at beauty wept.
She offered him her being and her soul,
And now in pure submission is she kept.
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