- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Untrue
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She would walk in the sun
Content, even happy
Believing in him, in his words
Then his actions belied them
His words rang untrue
Her tender heart couldn't take the hurt
The pain unbearable
She slipped silently away
Into a void of darkness
Away from the sun
Away from the pain
He never even noticed
She was gone.
- COMMENTS
Epmd607almost 15 years agoanother generic form about the loneliness of becoming a modern, confident woman. Your language was interesting enough that I read the entire thing, usually I don't make it very far in plain poems. See, the problem with writing a poem is the part where you put something wholly you in, personal, some detail that couldn't fit anybody who's ever been in a relationship with another adult human. I hate the double spacing, some words are superfluous, but overall good effort and try to put something in that you think represents you and not most of the adult population.
