- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Unusual thoughts
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Colored clouds of confusion lay
Deep and dark upon the day.
Layered thoughts intertwined
Cross through, around and in my mind.
Bright flashes of light left behind
Closing eyelids like sparkler’s shine.
The growing pain so forlorn
Laughter gasps and its echo is gone.
The days go fast, I stumble through,
And wonder where and what to do.
Medication keeps at bay,
The gnawing beast inside my brain,
From its ravenous rampaging reign.
The peace and quiet of beyond
Is calling me on and on and on.
- COMMENTS
jd4georgeover 19 years agoI wonder how the poem would flow if you dropped all the intial caps on each line, and simply let normal punctuation stand on its own. I also suspect that when read aloud, you might find a few words that weren't needed.
Still, an interesting read with a fair amount of potential.
