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BwalyaBwalyaover 10 years agoAuthor
Meaning of Bwalya.... of lack there of

@Ashesh9, Bwalya is actually my first name--I'm from a southern African Bantu tribe called the Bemba. Sadly, Bwalya has no special meaning; it's just a really, really common name among my people, which makes me greatly envy my best friend Mashiba. His name means endless river; would kill for a name that cool... metaphorically speaking.

kitten1964kitten1964over 10 years ago
The imagery...

is very compelling. I thought of how many people are out there, silent, their thoughts and feelings unexpressed. This is what I look for in poetry - feeling and the communication of that feeling.

Great job.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Bwalya ....powerful concepts visualized thru

Concise words ----excellent !

BTW What does Bwalya mean ?? The names of the New Poets today seem to be very intriguing --- Bwalya , Open Field , Educated Owl takin' a virtual stroll on the New Poems page is more excitin' than readin' one's Notifications on FB !!!

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