Up the Yin-Yang

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oneiria
oneiria
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Without light,

shadows die.

oneiria
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oneiriaoneiriaabout 8 years agoAuthor
Hiding behind a mask of anonymity

It is cowardice to hide behind a mask of anonymity. Let's see some of your poems, if you have ever written any. Most people have liked my micropoetry over the years. The comments by legerdemer are a case in point. Perhaps you are unfamiliar with micropoetry, such as the haiku and senryu forms or just don't like them. So don't read them. And don't comment on them. I read many poor contributions on the literotica site, but generally only comment on poems positively or where I see an opportunity to offer constructive suggestions. As a matter of fact you can take your comments and shove them, you guessed it, right up your yin-yang.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
No sun, sky dark

For this, someone gets their own poem removed from the New Poetry list. Shame on you and your ego. BTW your stuff is crap.

legerdemerlegerdemerabout 8 years ago
Love it

I truly love the paradox, crystallized, as it were, in just four words.