Us in Haiku


Us in Haiku


   Like the first warm breeze
Our lips just touch in the field
     But it makes us bloom


   We are like two dogs
Thoughts hazy in muggy heat
     You sink into me


   The leaves are pretty
But they rattle in the wind
   We know they will fall


 Flurries of snow come
Burying what we once had
   I will bloom again

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