Valentine~69

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 04/03/2022
Created 01/25/2006
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Valentine 69 ©

Valentine...
Let's sixty-nine...

Your head between thighs of mine
My head between thighs of thine

A new design
We now define

As we entwine
Giving new meaning to divine

My sweet, sweet Valentine...
Let's sixty-nine...

Until the sun does shine


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TrollyTrollyover 16 years ago
From beneath the bridge

Nice

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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That last line seems a bit odd, like an extra line that really doesn't belong. Just taking it away seems to leave everything sort of hanging. Try to juggle around the last few lines and see what you think; instead of:

As we entwine

Giving new meaning to divine

My sweet, sweet Valentine...

Let's sixty-nine...

Until the sun does shine

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try something like:

As we entwine

My sweet, sweet Valentine...

Let's sixty-nine

And give new meaning to divine...

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Isn't the word valentine latin for 'Giving new meaning to divine?'

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
69

cool perspective of valentines and positions... a very 'cool' poem.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
awesome~

cute, sexy full of passion and fun...great word scheme and imagery...a real gem!

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