Vapor Trails

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White lines
on blue
that seemed
so sharp,
so clear then
blur at the edges
as they
fade away.

You would
fly into
my life
at the edge
of a sonic boom
and disappear
like a vapor trail.

I remember
hugging you once,
when you stood
for a moment
and it
seemed so clear then,
but it blurred.

Later,
I guess
it was me
who faded away,
blurred into clouds
as I passed
through
your life.

And now,
miles apart,
we’ll talk
time to time,
with words that fade
to vapor trails
in blue skies.

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~hellbaby~~hellbaby~about 19 years ago
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This really struck a note for me. Thanks

WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
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This is very good poem. I'm not sure about the line breaks, though.