tagNon-Erotic Poetry[venetian...]

[venetian...]

bySenna Jawa©

 

 


    venetian blind
    stops the sun
    cajun music
    flows from PC

    at night
    sprinklers
    overshoot
    onto sidewalks

    overhead
    claustrophobic sky
    stars
    drown in pollution
    a street light
    in the puddle
    under my feet
    winks

    at me?

    i wink back

 

 

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2006-10-17

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