Venus's Flytrap

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"Come," she said, "and I will be your Venus."
Sensing no danger, I joined her,
Moving slowly over rounded hills,
Traversing flat, yet undulating softness.

Drawn further by love scent,
I moved to her soft petals and between,
Where I tasted her sweet, sticky nectar,
And became her possession.

Knowing I am not alone,
But along with others, I am at her service,
To do whatever she bids,
Enslaved willingly forever by my Venus's trap.

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sacksackalmost 19 years ago
An interesting interpretation...

Of the venus flytrap, which is usually more aggressive, closing on its prey. I would avoid the "forever" cliche in the last line by using "willingly enslaved by my venus's trap".

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