- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Very very
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Click hereThe fact that this is boring is indisputable,
But feel free to argue with my shadow until dawn
While I check the scenery in the back of my skull,
Pretty silhouettes cast upon the cave wall,
Ignoring the four pound hammer of your nasally voice
Bouncing blows off of the hard rock veneer of my soul.
I'm very good at well timed grunts and yeah's and uh huh's
It's a skill I picked up listening to my father and other people
Chronically incapably of holding my interest
I'd count you among them, but that wouldn't be fair
And god forbid that I ever get accused of that
No, your crime isn't the inability to turn my head
It's your unwillingness to try even though you know better
Or maybe because you do.
I don't know and even though I most likely care
I find it impossible to show it.
I blame my ego. Why?
Why the fuck not?
- COMMENTS
sassynycalmost 16 years ago"But feel free to argue with my shadow until dawn
While I check the scenery in the back of my skull,
Pretty silhouettes cast upon the cave wall"
these lines jumped out at me. you give a colorful description of mentally checking out on someone while remaining physically present. you even managed to make your distance sound beautiful in a poetic way.
Angelinealmost 16 years agohowever the Plato shadows on the cave wall reference is excellent. Glad I read it!
