- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Vibes
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Them’s everywhere,
bouncing through the dark,
warning of the shark,
from distant meadowlarks,
in the absent terrier’s bark,
The lost and found quark,
in the iris’ dilated dark,
the dank woods’ thinning bark,
the clean smile of the turk,
in the meaningless remark at work,
which cigarettes the damsel bought,
in the nightmare fast forgot.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoThe light veneer of
Rhythm & rhyme
Serves all the more to highlight the
Darkness underneath.
annaswirlsover 17 years agoclever phrasing, interesting twists, but in my opinion too much of a good thing... I found myself putting it into sing song rhythm, which to me, took away from the darker meaning.... but I could be way off, would not be the first time :)
WickedEveover 17 years agoInteresting. I like it. I read it earlier and couldn't think of a nifty comment. So, I gave up and just decided to say I like it. :)
