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Click hereAt first she was a vision;
Paradise across the room;
Red hair, and
A delicate field of freckles
Splashed over skin so fair.
A woman child with perfect breasts,
Long legs and head held high;
Her lips were pale crimson;
Her eyes a sunrise blue;
When she spoke
The room lit up,
And I did too.
I watched her as a predator,
Who would let this small bird pass,
And as she did,
I ached inside;
This old man for This lass.
And then she looked and met my gaze,
With smile brief and sweet;
An act of mercy
From a passing angel;
Her gift lay at my feet.
I couldn’t help myself;
I imagined her in my arms;
Those perfect breasts against my chest;
Her lips pressed into mine.
I closed my eyes in reverie;
Inhaled her soft, sweet center;
My tongue reached in and took a taste;
I heard her gasp and moan,
But when I looked,
She was gone, alas I was alone.
Very good. Evocative. Moving. Strong and descriptive lines.
Recommended.
captures facets of humanity and creates its own honesty. it's a poem that leaves behind an ache as its signature.