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Problems with complexity,
I find are really vexing me
Issues that have lots of numbers
Now just seem to make me slumber
Is it November or December?
Honestly, I don't remember.
There is something wrong with my head

I find I can't remember names
And different places look the same
Then I'm afraid that it's my doom
To get lost in a small bathroom
(Now, I don't mean to be a bitchin'
but I wish that it could be a kitchen.)
The Doc gave me a mental poke
And talked about a minor stroke
There IS something wrong with my head

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JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
I wanted to say ...

... something pertinent: now what was it? Ah yes, a light, welcome approach to a dark place and subject. Thanks.

todski28todski28over 9 years ago
the way the metre stumbles

could be cleaned up, and yet it plays with the title and theme that even though it jars a little, it helps to highlight the situation. 5ed

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
More rhyming OldBear?

I applaud your whimsical approach to this dilemma

Made me both smile and sigh at the same time

Loved it

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
Oldfriend : all Humankind is stoically awaitin' their Inevitable Ultimate Fate :

Alzheimers ' if they live long enough .

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
A deft light touch

For such a heavy subject. I love this one OldBear!