- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Waiting
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Click hereTime stands still,
The leaves don’t move.
There is not a ripple on the lake
The candle has gutted out.
Wax in a pool -
at its feet.
There are cobwebs on my face
I have grown roots
To the ground
Waiting,
Just waiting for your smile.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI instantly saw a latter day Miss Havisham in your poem. A very evocative poem!
b'brig
CupidsGurlalmost 19 years agoI could just see the cobwebs.
Waiting has a way of putting a lot of things into prospective. We have all been there at some point..waiting~
The smile I did not see coming..
Romantic line and hope ya got what you were waiting for.. If not... well there is always tomorrow?? err right.. Hope ya get your wish~~!!
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoWhile this poem starts out well and really has some creative expressions. It reads well, brings out emotions until the last line. This line does not hold up to the rest of the write....besides that it has strong potential
du lac~
Scott N. Leavittalmost 19 years agoI LIKE THIS A LOT!! tIME & EVERY THING STANDING STIHL WHEN YOU WAIT FOR SOME THING TO HAPPENS!! very good!!!
