Waiting Room

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Cordelia
Cordelia
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Rapture waits in time I’ve loaned
to festivals in a “maybe” past.
My trip to the moon has been postponed.

I sigh in spectrums under-toned,
with passions held in color-fast
while rapture waits in time I’ve loaned

with interest. I am unatoned
until I surrender up, at last.
My trip to the moon; it’s been postponed.

Tranquil in the seconds owned
with minutes counted, softly passed
in rapture. I have time I’ve loaned

to one collecting fees, disowned
by passing title. Yet all’s surpassed:
my trip to the moon has been postponed.

In patience, which has been condoned,
I hold my tickets, business-classed.
While rapture waits in time I’ve loaned.
And my trip to the moon has been postponed.


Cordelia
Cordelia
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annaswirlsannaswirlsalmost 20 years ago
layaway space travel

"My trip to the moon; it?s been postponed." this is a line that will stay with me. The rest is beautiful too. Thanks Cordelia.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Lovely....

....form poetry of this quality makes me shiver! I simply can not do it, and I read in amazement!

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
very nice..

this form is not so easy, you did it nicely, wonderful flow.

sweet poetry!

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