Walking the Trail

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I would like to trace your spine with my lips.
Following knobs like breadcrumbs on a trail
up the hollowed curve of your back,
fingertips skimming the sand dune ripples
of your ribcage.
At the outcropping of your shoulder blades
I would rest,
my face cupped between those jutting ridges,
and drink of my breath reflected back from your skin
warm, and tasting of home.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Delightful.

A woman taking a sensuous trip as she sample her lover's body taking pleasure in the journey.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 17 years ago
Nice

erotic and sensual all in one! Great write!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Welcome to Lit

With a rarity ~ a tastefully done erotic piece.

And as for rural hell - the term is a redundancy;

I feel for you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
p.s

welcome to Lit

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent

imagery. A well crafted poem that sparkles with vivid imagery. Kudos to you.

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