Wanna Bubble Bath?

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Mirrors surrounding heart
shapes. Pink bear claw tub
lit by candles glowing
dripping wax into puddles.

Three jasmine drops,
sliding down bubbled
legs. Toes coming up
for air. Hair glistens
roping down, fanning out
into waves of honey.

Strawberries placed
around pool lips, beseeching
a taking into twin teacups.
Tangy tidbits tempt
a lip, a tongue to trespass
past the rosé ring
and deviantly delight
inside a dip ...

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Velvet_PollyVelvet_Pollyover 17 years ago
why?

do mere decriptions pass for poetry on this site?

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
bubble bath?

I have rubber duckies (2) and a bunch of 'decoys' <grin think I have been inspired to take a bubble bath tonight <grin

"Pink bear claw tub

lit by candles glowing

dripping wax into puddles."

nice write!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Waxing Poetic!

A beautiful set of verses centering on the delights of taking a bubble bath. Very lyrical and refreshing!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Now here's a vision

Of water and suds

That'll keep you clean

No matter how dirty the scene...

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