Wanton

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I want you beneath the cherry tree

Succulent and red-ripe as can be

When the tide is swelling up

And pouring over me

When the sunshade falls

Crisp air all around

What I want of you

Please cover me, surround.

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unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
very lovely

This is poignant but concise, and it reminds me of the exacting images in japanese poetic forms. Very nicely written.

LeBrozLeBrozover 15 years ago
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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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There are some nice lines in this poem. I like the beginning with the cherry tree and the last two lines make a nice ending. You must have written this in a word doc, because of the double spacing. It would have a better appearance with single spacing. Anyway, keep writing and stop by the literotica poetry forum some time.

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