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Click hereI want you beneath the cherry tree
Succulent and red-ripe as can be
When the tide is swelling up
And pouring over me
When the sunshade falls
Crisp air all around
What I want of you
Please cover me, surround.
This is poignant but concise, and it reminds me of the exacting images in japanese poetic forms. Very nicely written.
This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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There are some nice lines in this poem. I like the beginning with the cherry tree and the last two lines make a nice ending. You must have written this in a word doc, because of the double spacing. It would have a better appearance with single spacing. Anyway, keep writing and stop by the literotica poetry forum some time.