- Non-Erotic Poetry
- War Diaries Day Three
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereWar Diaries
Day Three
I had a nightmare last night
The sweat left on my body
Stung me like a million bees
362 days left
I should have never signed on the line
My life is not mine now
Its one hundred and thirty in the shade
Suiting up for my first patrol
The butterflies are dancing again
God nothing in this place makes sense
Well here we go
Turning the first corner
They are everywhere
Who is a friend
Who is an enemy.
- COMMENTS
wildsweetoneover 16 years agoi mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temp rating here is so that it does not affect other temp ratings that follow. - wildsweetone
Anonymousover 16 years agoI hope the others pass fast...<p>
I like this. There are some facinating images here that envoke a sense of bewilderment and a shade of panic. Excellent. Thank you
