tagNon-Erotic PoetryWarning to a Submissive

Warning to a Submissive


You love his words
 tumbling, rolling, rippling, roilling
 avalanching into your head
 sweeping away your doubts
 remaking your hopes
 transforming the landscape of your past
 making his words yours
 making his dreams alive
 making you fly

You love his promises
 Drifting seeping sifting settling
 snow covering your pain
 painting pictures of a future
 full of hope and love
 with pain and service to a kindly master
 making his hopes yours
 making his desires alive
 making you thrill

But we can't stand by
 watching words and promises
 win your heart
 body mind and soul
 What is real is yet to be
 Truth and touch
 the facts of life
 You trust his future
 We see his past
 And fear

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