War's Vision - 3

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Part 3 of the 3 part series

Updated 03/17/2021
Created 10/30/2005
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LeBroz
LeBroz
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War's Vision - 3

Back at home base
Recovered from their mission;
These Special troops, the best there are
Face somber days ahead.

Their "Mickey's" gone
His premed studies ended;
Where he's at now
He'll trade his sniper scope
For the scope he'd always wanted.

Pieces of Joe Franks' bird
Lain out inside hushed hangar;
Autopsy to be performed
On this, his first coffin.

Joe Franks left much behind;
An unfinished doctoral thesis
A young surgeon wife
Precocious daughters, 8 and 5.

This Special troop gets much done
Funeral details performed, lost family adopted;
Missing troops are never replaced
Their vacant positions only filled.

Class work and training resumes
Lives' threads picked up;
Meanwhile, their next mission calls
Perpetual war grinds on...

© Leon Brozyna 2005


Author's Note: This concludes the trilogy.
A remembrance of every branch's Special Ops
Forces; among the finest specimens of humanity
it was my honor to support.

LeBroz
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dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman3 months ago

send the countries, Presidents, Senators off to war.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
that last line....

really says it all. though, i don't like war for all the wrong reasons, you've shown it from two sides of the coin. i admire that coming from one that knows a bit about military wheel.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
Special

loved the trilogy L~ a touching read and even deeper thanks to those Special forces.

Du LacDu Lacover 18 years ago
Thank you...

Leon..

Not only did I enjoy your form, content and wordage but I must thank you from my heart for making others see the world of the Special Ops personnal. Many who scream about the horrors of war know nothing.... when you love one who holds this in their past you come to cherish our freedome and the sacrifice (which is life long...) that is made. Thank you and I bow humbly...

blessings

Du`

bluerainsbluerainsover 18 years ago
*you have been mentioned on today's review

enjoyed the dedication to the souls who work so hard to carry the torch of freedom...coming from a military family ...I can relate...sighs/blue

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