Watching Her

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       Watching Her!
    He was spying her,as she strolled across the beach the waves crashing against her sandy feet,He was just beyond the cove, Watching Her....seeing her brought up stirrings of longing.How she walked so gracefully upon the sand, carrying herself with such inner beauty.           The wind blowing through her hair, causing it to whirl and cascade down
her shoulders in curly waves.The sun
beaming on her head exhibiting several
brilliant shades of red.
          Glimpsing the sparkle in her big brown eyes,Knowing that the moment those eyes would peer into his own,would be the moment he would lose himself to her.Sighing with a stifled moan. He watches her bending down picking thru the sand choosing and discarding from the mix of shells.Noticing how her long skirt clinged to her body in just the right places as the wind blew against her form.       Following up her being,glimpsing her smooth tummy his eyes peered her breasts, so supple and voluptuous.Her nipples hard, teasing him thru her lacey blouse exposing a scrumptious cleavage,to one mans tempting desire.
      Moving in for a closer view,wanting to see her sensuous smile as she jumps up in a victory grin,making her shell skip several times in the ocean's bin
        Smiling to himself he sees' her laugh, noticing the lil' laugh lines around the corner
of her mouth.He can't help but to gaze upon those delicious pouty lips, How moist and inviting they are.Feeling an overwhelming urge to take that lovely face in his hands                       Pondering how her beauty simply amazes him and he wonders how he ever ended up so blessed.She continues her stroll coming around the bend.He watches excitedly as she nears.His heart skips a beat,her steps feather light as she approaches the cove..His breathing excelerates and he feels a stirring, The Heat.
          He starts to fidget slightly in nervous anticipation.From the corner he spies her golden hair flying in the wind.The moment has come he knows.She peers up seeing his beautiful face,eyes twinkling instantly with undeniable desire her heart begins to race
        Her luscious mouth parting in such an intoxicating smile would make any mans heart skip a beat. He slips out from behind the cove meeting her half way.Grabbing her by the hips.pulling her body into his.
          Looking into her eyes,knowing he is done for now.Taking her face,letting that one finger trace. He leans in.and softly tastes.Their tongues meeting in unbridled desire,they lose themselves in each others arms.Letting their passion fuel the fire.  

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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Watching words

Almost nothing but straight description.

This new poet's submission needs a severe bout with an editor.

Correct the many typos,

Get rid of the "he said" "she did" style,

and "show" the reader, don't just "tell".

Some less used phrases might also improve this work.

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