- Erotic Poetry
- Water
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Click hereSurrounding me
The heated look of a voyeur
I feel the lewd eyes staring
Water cascading
Hiding nothing from them
Burning hot
I can't breathe
I scream your name
My need at a climax
Wrenching me from reality
Your hands snaking around me
A soft caress
More brutal than a death blow
Filling me with your seed
Looking back
Seeing only ripples on the surface
My invisible lover
- COMMENTS
QueenOfJewelzover 11 years agoAuthorThanks, I tried to make the imagery a big part and bring the reader into it, I appreciate your comment :)
LangstonLoverover 11 years agoThe invisible lover line at the end really caught me by surprise. I love the descriptions of your inner experience. You really took us there in a short time!
