- Non-Erotic Poetry
- We Dance
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Click herePainted toenails are what first I see
Graceful ankles then are to me shown
Calves are revealed to my wanton glance
I adore the knee you now display to me
Thighs oh so strong with muscular tone
I crave flesh, but settle for a ballroom dance.
Taken in you arms I feel safe and secure
Making upright love while wishing to be prone
You lead me onward without a chance
With your assured boldness to my demure
We dance
Form C: Curtal Sonnet
Theme #6 Write a poem about ballroom dancing.
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineeralmost 15 years agoYour imagery made my imagination move before the words got there. That's good poetry.
Problems with the first line of the second stanza; not talking about the typo; I'm not someone who says "great" and then finds the chink in the armor. I think the line needs work. Still liked it very much.
Catching up on frequent contributors and liking what I see.
Angelineover 15 years agoand I really liked it then. And I like the way you resolved the meter issue in the last line. There's a typo ("you" should be "your," I think), but really that's no big deal at all. It's a lovely graceful poem. :-)
