See Dick run for corporate power before the sun up becomes the rush hour.
The white picket fence and garden look dour with dog pies from Spot
tied up by the hour.
See Dick run when business is done to give it a whirl with Pop the Fly Girl.
A little Dick fun never hurt anyone.
Jane's having fun, funny funny Jane. See Jane having her fourth whiskey sour.
See Dick scrub the red from his collar. See Jane come undone with a gun.
Do run run, Dick, do run run.
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is this a riff of a song?
the sonics of the final line seem to be from a familiar song that I cant quite place, you managed to freshen up a cliché big time here, gave me a small grin,
your rhyme in this piece is so smooth it highlights the piece without any forced stutters or pauses, nice work gmmore...
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Janet & John books were never like this!
Do run, run.......
Ain't it fun ?
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