Wearing Thin

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Damn you
Damn you one and all
Tired of your childish games
Sick of hearing how you care

Lies and lies and lies again
More untruths for me to swallow
Only love I crave
That which you do not offer

Kink and lust
The name of your game
I gave you what you crave
Do you reciprocate
I think not

YOU, you know who you are
The one that thrills me
Passion unleashed
Undeniable ecstasy
And love, even, possibly

Wanting more
I wait patiently
Forgiving your trespasses
Against me

Just remember
When I am gone
And you are alone
That I was here
Being patient and consistent

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thunderf64thunderf64over 20 years ago
Wearing Thin

You need to keep with the same rythum of the stanzas. Break your rythumn for effect with the "You," next line "You are ...."

It would convey the feel better.

Other than that I liked it.

(Okay okay I have felt the same sentiment shere in my home)

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