- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Weave
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Click hereLike sunlight through a kaleidoscope
Weaves dancing patterns of colorful lace
Ever changing as the crystals dance
Like an author’s search for written grace
Ever changing as the crystals dance
Like a writer’s thoughts all a’ tumble
Seeking that perfect word or phrase
To bring order to a tangled jumble
Seeking those perfect words or phrases
To strengthen each poem or story’s pace
Like sunlight through a kaleidoscope
Weaves dancing patterns of colorful lace
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agowhen I looked at some other things you had written. I really like the picture you created, reminds me of stain glass windows too. Very nice.
Maria2394almost 20 years agoI like to tell people that cause I often wonder if any of mine come up as spinner picks.
is this a triolet? its good, I dont know about the meter requirements, but I did see a couple of "extra" words ( ie, in the line that contains *all a'tumble" I would drop the "all") that interrupt the flow, jee, I hate that word,flow, but you know what I mean, I hope..enjoyed the read :)
jthserraalmost 20 years agointo the written word. A kalidescope of sparkling lines... very good.
jim : )
Angelinealmost 20 years agoas natural as sunlight through leaves creates a lovely image in your poem. This makes a nice companion piece to Tristesse's Weave. There is a shifting, kaleidoscope quality to the way a writer attempts to create meaning for a reader, and your poem captures this well. Thank you. :)
